Response to Taylor Ling

Taylor Ling wrote her blog on a response of the video,  Cut Up the Back of Your T-shirt. After watching the video, I found that I agree with a lot of what Taylor said in her blog. Although cutting up the back of your t-shirt may seem like an easy task, after watching the video I realized it is much harder than I would have expected. The young female in the video who is demonstrating had many positives throughout the video but like always there are many things that could be improved. 

I agree with Taylor that the young girl did a great job with showing each step. She made the steps clear which made it easy to follow along. By repeating steps, it makes it much easier for the viewer to follow along and understand each step. Taylor felt that the girl in the video talked very clear throughout the video which I must say I agree with. She spoke loud enough that I could understand every step and follow along which made her speech that much better.

The video had some flaws as well as Taylor stated in her blog. I agree with Taylor that the girl in the video did go a little fast through the weaving step and she could have slowed down and tried to describe how to do it in a more clear way. As well as not being clear in that step and going too fast, I felt that she could have incorporated some of the other steps that she skipped over. She said that she would show them later but it would have been nice if she would have taken a little time to actually show those steps. For the most part I felt that the video was very well done and I agreed with Taylor in the points she made.